支招小作文(172) I 静态表 一个欧洲国家捕鱼业信息对比

January 18, 2024

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[2024/ 1/ 13] The table below shows the fishing industry in a European country according to four indicators in 2022.

【主体段分段】：

- Body 1：Annual catch

- Body 2：Annual pay for each employee + annual fuel

【开头段】

The table presents information of large-scale industrial ships and small-scale fishing boats in a country in Europe for the year 2002.

【概述段】

In general,although more people were employed in small-scale fishing boats, smaller vessels had less catch than large ships. Besides, the operating cost of larger ships far outnumbered that of small boats both in terms of annual pay for employees and the fuel consumption.

思路要点：

- small-scale fishing boats雇员更多，但是捕鱼量低于large-scale industrial ships

- large-scale industrial ships的成本(annual pay for employees 和the fuel consumption)>small-scale fishing boats

【Body 1】

Looking at the information in more detail, we can see thatonly 500,000 people worked in big-scale industrial ships, andthis figurewassignificantly less thanthe number of those working in smaller fishing boats.However, industrial ships noticeablyoutnumberedfishing boats in terms of annual catch.Theformercaught 29 million tonnes of fish for food,butonly 24 million tonnes of fish was caught by small fishing boats for this purpose.Also,whilethe quantity of fish caught for industrial process by large ships was 22 million tonnes, small fishing boats showed no records of catch in this item.

思路要点：

- big-scale industrial ships的员工数量远远低于small-scale fishing boats的员工人数

- annual catch：big-scale industrial ships > small-scale fishing boats

- food：前者29million tonnes，但是后者只有24million tonnes

- industrial process：big-scale industrial ships为22million tonnes，但是small-scale fishing boats无数据

【Body 2】

We can also find thatcompared with employees of large ships who earned an annual salary of $25,000~$35,000, people working in small-scale fishing boats got lower annual pay($200-$300).Also, 65,000 gallons of fuel was needed for a larger vessel,whereasfor a smaller vessel, only 8,500 gallons were necessary.

思路要点：

- annual pay：small-scale fishing boats员工

- annual fuel consumption：larger vessel需要65,000 gallons，但是smaller vessel只需8,500 gallons