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The map below shows the changes that have taken place at a zoo in Australia between 1960 and now.

主体段分段：一图一段

开头段

The maps illustrate the layout of a zoo in Australia, comparing its design in 1960 with its current arrangement.

概述段

Overall,this zoohas experienced noticeable modificationsduring the given period, featuring theintroductionof transportation and recreational amenities,as well astherelocationandremovalof several animal exhibits.

思路要点：

- 变化显著

- 新增休闲场所、交通更便利，部分设施地点改变、部分设施拆除

Body paragraph 1

In 1960, a winding pathran throughthe zoofrom north to south,dividing the area into several sections.The northwestern areahoused African animals,whileAustralian species were kept to the south.On the opposite side of the main path, there was a bird enclosure,adjacent toa seal show thatstood at the end ofa branch roadnearthe harbor.Below them, a chimpanzee habitat was situated, followed by a gift shopfurther south.The entire eastern partof the zoo was designated as a picnic area.

思路要点：1960年

- 一条南北走向的步行道将这个动物园分成了不同部分

- 西北African animals，它南边是Australian animals

- 步行道对面是bird，附近有seal show(位于分岔路口末端、邻近harbor)

- 南边有chimpanzee，最南边是gift shop，东边是picnic area

Body paragraph 2

Today,a ferry terminal has been introducedto the west ofthe former harbor, which nowhas been removed tothe northwestern corner. Two new entranceshave been constructedat both ends ofthe main path. The Australian animal habitatremains unchanged,whilethe former African animal section is now dedicated to wild animals.Meanwhile, the seal showhas been moved to the previouschimpanzee habitat, and a smaller habitat for African animalshas been addedto the west.However, the bird enclosurehas been removed. The original gift shophas been expanded intoa two-storey building.Moreover, a newcable carsystem,extending from the northern to the southern part ofthe zoo,has been builtnear the picnic area,significantly improving accessibility for visitors.

思路要点：

- path没变，但原来harbor的西边新建了ferry terminal，原来的harbor改址到西北角落

- path南北两端新增entrance

- 原来Australian animals区域不变，但African animals区域被用作wild animals保护区，

- seal show改建在原来chimpanzee区域的位置，它西边新建一个小面积的African animal区

- bird区域被拆除

- gift shop被扩建成两层

- picnic area附近新建南北走向的cable car

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