12月2日雅思大作文示范写作 | 私家车给人们生活带来的利多or给环境带来的弊大

November 4, 2023

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本期作者：张婷婷

2023年12月02日雅思大作文题目

More and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment？(2023/12/02)

范文及解析

Introduction

Gone are the days when owning a car was a luxury. In modern age, amushroomingnumber of people are buying and using their private cars. While cars have brought peopletangibleboons, Istaunchlybelieve that such a development is ultimatelydetrimentalto the environment.

解析

解析：本次考题是重复环境类的考题，整体内容的难度并不大；注意这个题目限定了对个人的好处，对环境的坏处，审题的时候注意不要偏题离题；

❖ mushrooming adj.迅速增长的;

❖ tangible adj.明确的，真实的；可感知的;

❖ boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西;

❖ staunchly adv.坚定地；

❖ detrimental adj.有害的，不利的;

Body 1

Autos can definitely free people from inconvenience and discomfort in ourquotidianlife, savingheaps oftime for people andelevatingthe quality of life. Compared with buses and subways packed with passengers, private cars are less crowded and better meet the townsman’s demand of more frequentegressionswith higher quality. Apart from commuting by cars during the week, it is possible to drive to the supermarket on weekends and transport large quantities of daily necessities home. In addition, more private cars have allowed millions of people travel on their own. A self-driving tour, be it taking kids on a road trip or visiting family,addsendlessspice toour lives.

解析

1) 汽车使人们的出行更加方便、快捷和舒适;

2) 汽车使人们的出行更自由，给我们的生活增添了无尽的情趣；

❖ quotidian adj.每日的；平凡的；

❖ heaps of 大量;许多；

❖ elevate v.提高，增加；

❖ egression n.外出；

❖ adds spice to v. 增加乐趣；

汽车无疑使人们的出行更加方便、快捷和舒适，为人们节省了大量的时间，提高了生活质量。与乘坐公交车和地铁相比，私家车不那么拥挤，更能满足城里人更频繁、更高质量的出行需求。除了工作日开车上下班，周末还可以开车去超市，把大量的日用品运回家。此外，越来越多的私家车使得数百万人可以自己出行。自驾游，无论是带孩子自驾游还是探亲，都给我们的生活增添了无尽的情趣；

Body 2

In spite of the upsides brought by a higher rate of car ownership, downsides to the environment are moreconspicuous. When people frequently drive cars, this accelerates thedepletionofexhaustiblefossil fuel, which induces thethornyissue of energy shortfalls. Also, the toxic fumes, such assulfur dioxideandcarbon monoxide, released from the cars are the chiefculpritof atmosphericcontamination. Our life will be clouded by smog which undermines our living environment. Other than harmful gases, greenhouse hazes (i.e. carbon dioxide)exacerbatethe global warming and then potentiallytriggerthe negative change of global climate.

解析

1) 私家车的盛行引发了棘手的能源短缺问题；

2) 越来越多的汽车的使用破坏了我们的生活环境，加剧了全球变暖；

❖ conspicuous adj.显眼的，明显的;

❖ depletion n.损耗，耗尽;

❖ exhaustible adj.可被用尽的；会枯竭的

❖ thorny adj.棘手的，麻烦的;

❖ sulfur dioxide 二氧化硫 ;

❖ carbon monoxide 一氧化碳;

❖ culprit n.问题的起因;

❖ contamination n.污染;

❖ exacerbate v.使恶化，使加剧;

❖ trigger v.引发，触发；

尽管较高的汽车拥有率带来了好处，但对环境的负面影响更为明显。当人们频繁开车时，这加速了可耗尽的化石燃料的消耗，从而引发了棘手的能源短缺问题。此外，汽车排放的二氧化硫和一氧化碳等有毒气体是大气污染的罪魁祸首。我们的生活将被雾霾笼罩，它破坏了我们的生活环境。除有害气体外，温室烟雾(即二氧化碳)加剧了全球变暖，进而可能引发全球气候的负面变化。

Conclusion

Torecapitulate, private cars, like everything else, have more than one face, whose prevalence does go hand in hand with traffic jams and environmentdeterioration.

解析

❖ recapitulate vi.概括；重述要点；

❖ deterioration n.恶化 ;

总结前文，重申观点；

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