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October 30, 2024
3分钟学会一个雅思7分句系列 | | 栏目推送说明
3分钟学会一个雅思7分句/段系列，
每次教你学会一个7分句/段。
雅思7分作文，
就是日复一日、点点滴滴的积累。
Some people believe children should have organized activities in their free time. Others believe children should decide what to do in their free time on their own.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
【句子示例】
Allowing children to manage their free time promotes independence and decision-making skills. This encourages them to take responsibility for their own choices, fostering a sense of autonomy that contributes to their overall personal development.
【解析】
1. 内容维度（Task Response）
这两个句子分析了孩子自己安排课余时间的好处。
2. 文脉逻辑维度（Coherence and Cohesion）
这个句子可以作为同意第二个观点的其中一个分论点。需要注意的是对于discuss both views的提问类型，写作者还需要分析第一个观点，比如让孩子参与组织好的活动有哪些作用。
3. 词汇维度（Lexical Resource）
“promote”是动词，表示“提升”。
“foster”是动词，表示“促进”。
“autonomy”是名词，表示“自主”。
4. 语法和句型维度（Grammatical Range and Accuracy）
第一个句子的主语是allowing children to manage their free time，注意allowing是动名词形式。句子的谓语使是promote的单三形式promotes，最后是and并列的两个名词词组作为宾语部分independence and decision-making skills。第二个句子主语是代词this，谓语是encourage的单三形式encourages，接着是宾语them和动词不定式to take responsibility for their own choices。逗号之后是现在分词fostering以及后面的宾语 a sense of autonomy，最后是that引导的定语从句修饰a sense of autonomy。
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