支招小作文(213) I 动态变迁地图 学生宿舍楼变化

January 16, 2025

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The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building.

分段方法：一图一段

Body 1：2010年

Body 2：Now

开头段

The maps compare the layout of a student accommodation building as it was in 2010 and today.

概述段

Overall, this buildinghas undergone significant changes, primarily involving the addition of more student bedrooms to accommodate a larger student population.Additionally, a large car parkhas been introduced, along with other new facilities.

思路要点：

- 新建更多student-bedroom以容纳更多学生

- 新建一个car parking

Body paragraph 1

In 2010, students could enter this residence hall through the main entranceat the southwestern corner.Upon entry, they would walk down a hallway with a dormitoryon the left,adjacent toa bathroom.On the right-hand side, a narrow garden stretched along the length of the hallway.Continuing straight ahead, students could reach another bedroomat the far end of the building.Turning left, a kitchenstood next tothe dormitory,followedby a third bedroomin the northeastern cornerof the hall.At the western endof the building, there was a smaller garden and a living room.

思路要点：2010年

- main entrance位于西南角

- 进入之后是hallway，所有边是一个student-bedroom，和一个bathroom相邻

- 右手边是一个长条状的garden

- 正冲着hallway尽头是另一个student-bedroom，与一个kitchen相邻→隔壁是另一个student-bedroom，西边是一个小规模的garden和一个living room

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, several significant changes have been made to the current layout.Whilethere have been no changes tothe main entrance, the hallway hasbeen shortened to create space fora newly built en-suite room,which is located to the left oftheoriginaldormitory in the southeastern corner.Similarly, the previous gardenon the southern sidehas been replaced bya spacious car park. The two bedroomson the eastern sideof the buildinghave remained unchanged,butthe kitchenhas been expanded toserve as both a cooking area and a communal social space for students.On the northern side, twoadditionalstudent bedroomshave been added,replacingtheformergarden and living room.

思路要点：Now

- entrance没有变化，但hallway被缩短，在东南角的student-bedroom左边新建一个en-suite room

- 南边的garden改建成一个car parking

- 东边的两组student-bedroom没有变化，但kitchen增加了social interaction的功能

- 北边的garden和living room被改建成另外两个student-bedroom

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