Whether+主谓不是完整句子(为你批改)

英语中某些结构只有在书面表达中才容易出现错误，"whether...or"结构就是其中一个典型的例子。它可以引导宾语从句、主语从句或让步状语从句，但无论哪种情况，都必须与主句搭配使用，句子才完整。

1.I don't care whether he is rich or poor.

2.Whether you go or stay is your choice.

3.Whether you come or not, it doesn't matter.

4.Whether you go by air or by train,tell me when you arrive.

今天推荐的原创英文中就存在类似的问题。虽然还有一些其他语法和词汇搭配方面的错误，但仍然感谢原文作者提供的真实语境素材。看看原文吧，你能发现几个问题？

一，我发现的问题

二，分析问题并修改

学生敢用英语独立完成一篇作文，证明他是认真的，绝对不是随便应付。只要自己写的，就一定有问题。如果几乎没有问题，那一定是抄袭或者死背范文，对自己不负责，骗自己骗老师的态度，这种人最终还是学不好英语。一篇学生的原创英文至少都有10个左右的错误，文章越长错误越多。今天这小段就有6个问题值得讨论和研究。

（一）第一句话，我试着把“复杂”改成“困难”，但还是有点啰嗦，最好删除；mean doing sth意味着做某事；注意介词搭配spend...on。

If you want to speak English well, just remember two things: persistence and practice. Persistence means spending a little time on English every day.

（二）whether引导的仅仅是个从句，应该要有主句，根据语境判断，这里不适合用用whether从句了，改用A or B结构。

1.Listening to a conversation or reading a few pages helps a lot.

2.English or German is fit for you to study.英语或德语适合你学习。

（三）词组中的mistake是可数名词单数，不能单独使用，这里用复数形式；speak up大胆的说出来。

Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Just dare to speak up.

最后修改版本如下

If you want to speak English well, just remember two things: persistence and practice. Persistence means spending a little time on English every day. Listening to a conversation or reading a few pages helps a lot. Practice means using what you've learned. Don't be afraid of making mistakes. Just dare to speak up.

如果你想把英语说好，只需要记住两点：坚持和练习。坚持意味着每天花一点时间在英语上。无论是听一段对话，还是读几页书，都会很有帮助。练习意味着去运用你学到的知识。不要害怕犯错误。只要敢于开口说。

三，总结

下面是DeepSeek的评价。

思考题[烟花][微风]单词填空。

1.Whether you come or go _your choice.

2.He dare not jump into the water, _he?

3.I spend two hours _my homework.

4.Whether you come by bike or on foot, never _late for school.