支招小作文(212) I 静态表 四个国家三种食用油产量对比

January 9, 2025

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The table below shows the production (in tonnes) of three kinds of oils in four different countries in 2020.

分段方法：

Body 1：colza oil, peanut oil（整体数据较高）

Body 2：olive oil（整体数据较低）

开头段

The table compares the production of oil from colza, peanuts, and olives in the UK, Spain, Greece, and France in 2020.

概述段

Overall, peanut oiltook the leadin the UK,whilecolza oildominated production inthe other three countries.In comparison, olive oil productionremained consistently lowacross all four nations.

思路要点：

- 整体而言，UK的Peanut oil产量最高，剩下国家colza oil产量最高

- 所有国家Olive oil产量都最低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear that2,300 tonnes of peanut oil were produced in the UK,significantly higher thanthe 1,500 tonnes of colza oil.However, the reverse was true inthe remaining countries. France producedthe highest amount ofcolza oil(4,000 tonnes),followed bythe figure in Greece(3,000 tonnes) and that in Spain (2,000 tonnes). Fewer than 2000 tonnes of peanut oil was produced in these three countries,with France having the smallest outputat just 900 tonnes.

思路要点：18-25(蓝色)、26-45(橙色)

- UK：peanut oil产量2300 tonnes， 显著超过colza产量(1500 tonnes)

- 其余三个国家规律相反

- France的colza oil产量最高(4000 tonnes), Greece排第二(3000 tonnes)，Spain排第三(2000 tonnes)

- 其余三个国家的peanut oil都低于2000 tonnes，其中France最低(900 tonnes)

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, olive oil productionwas much lower in all the four countries. Franceled olive oil productionwith 900 tonnes,compared toonly 600 tonnes in Greece.Similaramounts of olive oil were produced in UK and Spain, at approximately 750 tonnes each.

思路要点：

- 四个国家中olive产量较少

- France的olive oil产量在四个国家中最高(900 tonnes)，Greece最低(600 tonnes)

- UK、Spain的olive oil产量相似，大约为750 tonnes，

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