支招小作文(188) I 地图 一个村庄的变化

June 13 , 2024

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The maps show the changes in Shalton Village from 1910 to 2010.

【主体段分段】：

一图一段

【开头段】

The maps compare the layout of Shalton Village in 1910 and 2010.

【概述段】

It is clear thatthe villagehad witnessed significant changesin the given period, including the expansion of accommodation areas and the reduction of green spaces.

思路要点：

- 该村庄变化巨大

- 住宅区增多，绿化区减少

【Body 1】

We can see thatthe villagemainly occupied a triangular place.In 1910,there wasa large housein the center, with some treessurrounded nearby.To the south, a grocery store, a house and a bakerwere locatedon the northern side ofHigh Street,just oppositeanother two group of houses. This streetintersected withSchool Road and London Road.On the former road, a butcher shop was builtin the middle,witha schoolconstructedto the southand a housing unitsitedto the north.However, apart from a post officeon the intersection withSchool Road,there wereno other facilities on London Road.

思路要点：1910年

- 占据三角形区域

- 中央是一个large house, 周围被树环绕

- 南边，在High Street北边有一个grocery、一个house和一个baker，马路对面有两个house

- School Road中间有个butcher shop，它的南边是一个school, 北边是一组house

- High Street和School Road、London Road相交

- London Road和School Road交叉口有个post office,除此之外没有其他设施

【Body 2】

Subsequently, remarkable changes had taken place to this villageafter 100 years. The previous large house and surrounding treesin the centerwere removed to make way fora newly built branch roadleading to London Road,withsome housesdistributedon both sides.Noticeably,4 units of housinghad been constructedon the northern side ofLondon Road.On the south ofHigh Street,we can see the addition oftwo groups of houses,whereasa Cafehad taken up the place ofthe former facilitieson the opposite side.In terms ofSchool Road,althoughthe initial school and post officeremained unchanged, the previous butcher shopwas transformed intoa supermarket, and a separate parking space was available for customers.To the north of it, a bankwas added on the original site ofhouses.

思路要点：2010年

- 原来中间的large house、周边的树消失，London Road新建了一条岔路，两边有house

- London Road：新增4组house

- High Street：南边新增2组house，但一个Cafe取代了原先对面的设施

- School Road：school和post office无变化；butcher shop改建成有独立parking的supermarket；北边house改建成bank

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