8月13日雅思大作文示范写作 | 消费品导致环境破坏的原因及解决办法

　　August 19, 2022

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　　本期作者：朱玲娇

　　2022年8月13日雅思大作文题目

　　The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

　　高分范文及解析

　　Introduction

　　With more consumer goods produced, the environmental problem has beenintensified. Personally, behind this problem are two predominantculprits, and this issue can be promisingly tackled.

　　解析

　　老题，说明文。注意原因部分，是什么原因导致消费品的增加，进而导致自然环境的破坏。

　　Ø intensify vt. 加剧

　　Ø culprit n.[C] 不好事情的原因

　　Reasons

　　To start with, the surging population should be responsible for this phenomenon. This is mainly because the huge population has naturally brought the increasing demands for consumer goods. To meet such needs, people are in dire need of not only acolossalquantity of raw materials but also vast areas of land for establishing anoverwhelmingnumber of factories, both of which contribute to the environmentdeterioration. A typical example is that more trees are cut down for furniture and fuels are tapped for electricity production, incurringdeforestationand soildegradation. Besides, it is clever advertising, which usuallyexaggerates the functions and features of products, thatlures consumers into buying new consumer goods and gradually following the trend of the throw-away culture. This has also naturally brought the increase in the production of goods, whichwreaks havoc onthe natural environment.

　　解析

　　原因1：人口激增 → 需求增加；原因2：受广告诱惑 → 买更多商品；这两个原因最终都导致环境的破坏

　　Ø colossal adj. 巨大的

　　Ø overwhelming adj. 巨大的，压倒性的

　　Ø deterioration n. 恶化

　　Ø deforestation n. 砍伐树林

　　Ø degradation n. 退化

　　Ø exaggerate vt. 夸大

　　Ø lure vt. 引诱

　　Ø wreak havoc on vi. 造成威胁

　　Solutions

　　Considering thegravityof this issue, corresponding schemes can be put on the agenda. The firstimperativeapproach is that the government should issue policies regardingsubsidisationto motivate businesses to develop new products bytappingrenewable or recyclable materials. Meanwhile, additional tax can beimposedupon the factories that discharge tonnes ofswageand toxic gases. Driven by such policies, producers are more likely to manufacture more environmentally-friendly products. Additionally, public-service advertisements can be made to publicise thehazardsof the throw-away culture, which can raise consumers’ awareness of purchasing goods more rationally.

　　解析

　　方法1：政府补贴鼓励公司研发对环境友好的新产品 + 对环境破坏严重的公司征税；方法2：教育大众理性消费

　　Ø gravity n. 严重性

　　Ø imperative adj. 迫切的

　　Ø subsidisation n. 补贴

　　Ø tap vt. 开发，利用

　　Ø impose vt. 强制推行

　　Ø swage n. 污水

　　Ø hazard n. 害处

　　Conclusion

　　In the light of the above, since possible factors and feasibleremedieshave been clarified, it is advised that relevant parties take actions immediately.

　　解析

　　重申观点

　　Ø remedy n.[C] 补救方法