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3分钟学会一个雅思7分句系列 | | 栏目推送说明
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3分钟学会一个雅思7分句/段系列,
每次教你学会一个7分句/段。
雅思7分作文,
就是日复一日、点点滴滴的积累。
Some people think painting and drawings are as important as other subjects, and they should be compulsory in high school education.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
【句子示例】
Painting and drawing are not as universally important as core subjects such as mathematics, science and languages, so making them mandatory for all high-school students would be unnecessary.
【解析】
1. 内容维度(Task Response)
这个句子比较了绘画和其它科目重要性上的区别,并表明绘画没必要成为高中必修课。
2. 文脉逻辑维度(Coherence and Cohesion)
这个句子可以作为结尾总结的部分,表示作者不同意题目观点。
3. 词汇维度(Lexical Resource)
“universally”是副词,表示“普遍地”。
“core”是形容词,表示“核心的”。
“mandatory”是形容词,表示“强制的”。
4. 语法和句型维度(Grammatical Range and Accuracy)
本句由并列连词so连接两个分句。第一个分句的主语是painting and drawing,之后是系动词和表语are not as universally important as core subjects,其中not as + 形容词 + as 表示“不如……那么……”,such as之后是对 core subjects 的举例。so连接两个表示因果关系的独立分句,后面的分句表示结果。该分句的主语是动名词短语making them mandatory for all high-school students,情态动词would之后是系动词be和表语unnecessary。
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