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This table below shows percentages of satisfaction that First-Year students rated their modules in five aspects in 2014.

主体段分段方法：

主体1：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

主体2：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

开头段

The table illustrates the proportions of first-year students who were satisfied with three subjects (Economics, Law and Commerce) across five aspects in 2014.

概述段

Overall, Commerceachieved the highest satisfaction levelsacross all five categories.Whilestudents in Economics and Commercewere most satisfied withteaching quality, Lawlagged behindin this area.

思路要点：

- Commerce三个方面的好评率最高

- Economics、Commerce在teaching的好评率最高，但Law在teaching的好评率最低

Body paragraph 1

It is clear thatthe three modulesdiffered significantly regardingteaching-related criteria. Commerceperformed exceptionally well, with 95% of students expressing satisfaction with pre-course information,compared withjust 59% for Economics.Likewise, 95% of the surveyed students were satisfied with teaching quality in Economics and Commerce, while Lawrecorded the lowest figureat just 62%.A similar pattern was observedfor tutoring sessions, where Commerce and Economicsscored above90%,compared with a noticeably lower figure forLaw (76%).

思路要点：Pre-Course info、Teaching、Tutor

- 这三个方面，三个学科的满意度比例差距较大

- Pre-Course info：Commerce满意度最高(95%)，但Economics仅为59%

- Teaching：Economics、Commerce都为95%，Law仍然排最后一位(62%)

- Tutor：Commerce、economics满意度都超过了90%，但law数据较低(72%)

Body paragraph 2

However,satisfaction with resources showed less significant variations, as the difference among the three subjects was under 20%. Commerce stilltook the lead, with over 80% giving positive feedback to both printed and other materials. Paper materials for economics were favored by 81% of the students,roughly 20% higher thanthe rate for other resources.Conversely, 70% of students expressed satisfaction with printed resources provided by the Department of Law, which wasslightly lower thanthe 80% recorded for other resources.

思路要点：Resource(print)、Resource(other)

- 这两个方面，三个学科满意度差异不大，在20%以内

- Commerce：满意度仍旧最高，两个resource的满意度都超过80%

- Economics：resource(print)满意度为81%，比resource(other)高了约20%

- Law：resource(print)满意度为70%，但resource(other)满意度为80%

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