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The two bar charts illustrate the changes in the overall population of a UK town and the proportion of people in different age groups from 1951 to 2011.

主体段分段：一图一段

开头段

The bar charts illustrate the total population of a town in the UK and present how this population was distributed across five age groups from 1951 to 2011.

概述段

Overall, the town's populationexperienced a significant increaseduring the period. The middle-aged group (41-to-64-year-olds)consistently represented the largest proportion.

思路要点：

- 总人口呈上升趋势

- 41-64的人数一直最多

Body paragraph 1

According to the first bar chart, this town recorded an overall population of 100,000 in 1951, whichthendoubledto 200,000 in 1991.However,this was followed bya slight decrease toapproximately 175,000 by 2011.

思路要点：

1950年人口为100,000→随后上涨了两倍，到1990年达到200,000→随后小幅度下降到2010年达到175,000

Body paragraph 2

Regardingthe distribution across age groups, older individualsconstantly made up a larger share of the population. The 41–64 age groupdominatedthroughout the period,althoughtheir figuredropped significantlyfrom 47% in 1951 to 38% in 2011.By contrast, the percentage of those aged 65 and overnearly tripled, reaching20% by the end of the period.Younger age groups showed less dramatic changes.Despiteminor fluctuations, the proportion of children aged 0-14remained relatively stableat 15%. Meanwhile, the 15–29 and 30–40 age groupspeakedat 21% and 18% in 1991, beforefalling slightly to 20% and 17% in 2011.

思路要点：

- 41-64：占比始终最高，从1951年的47%急剧下降到2011年达到38%

- 65+：1951到2011年间上涨了3倍达到20%

- 其余三个年龄段数值变化幅度较小

- 0-14：经历轻微波动，但数值稳定在15%

- 15-29、30-40：1991年都达到峰值21%和18%→2011年都小幅度下降到20%和17%

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