8月20日雅思大作文示范写作 | 电子设备是否影响读写

August 22, 2022

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本期作者：朱玲娇

2022年8月20日雅思大作文题目

Some people say that communication by using computers and phones will have negative effects on young people’s writing and reading skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

高分范文及解析

Introduction

With computers and phonesutilisedmuch frequently for communication, many people worry that youngsters’ basicliteracy skillswill beadverselyaffected. Personally, I have the same concern.

解析

雅思又双叒叕出和科技有关的题呀，这题也是老题重现，但和上半年出题不太一样的点在于：这篇只能写“如何影响读写能力”，且“读”和“写”两个层面都要包含。

Ø utilise vt. 使用

Ø literacy skill n. 读写能力

Ø adversely adv. 不利地

Body 1

Admittedly, there arean array ofapplications and websitesconducive tobettering users’ basic reading and writing skills, ranging from online dictionaries to courses, both of which offer easier access to learning relevantcollocationsand distinguishing minute differences betweensemanticsofsynonyms. However, the downsides of frequent usage of digital devices are much more notable. To start with, such practice mayincurpoor readingproficiency. Though those technologies have provided them with convenient approaches to discussing with other readers, such a reading mode actually will make youngsters easily impacted by others’ ideas and, in the long term,renderthemhinderedinponderingindependently. Meanwhile, it is thesiren callsof other recreational apps and websites that lure netizens who lack self-discipline and thushamperthe cultivation of their reading efficiency.

解析

本次范文，两段分写对于读、写能力的影响。因此，本段开头，让步的占比相对较少。<让步> 确实也有有助于读写的app，但相对使用较少；<立论1> 读：1. 便于和其他读者时时讨论，但也影响了安静地自己思考的能力；2. 对于缺乏自律性的人来说，更容易被其他app或网站所吸引，影响阅读效率的培养

Ø an array of adj. 一系列的

Ø conducive to adj. 对…有益（to是介词）

Ø collocation n.[C] 搭配

Ø semantics n.[U] 词的含义，语义

Ø synonym n.[C] 近义词

Ø incur vt. 导致（常做贬义）

Ø proficiency n. 擅长

Ø render vt. 使（常做贬义）

Ø hinder vt. 阻碍

Ø ponder vt. 思考

Ø siren call n.[C] 诱惑

Ø hamper vt. 阻碍

Body 2

Anotherconspicuousside effect is that such practice willexertan impact on youngsters’ writing skills. This is mainly because the majority of software and other online devices, when users are typing, can not onlyautomaticallyfinish the remaining spelling of a word and give possible collocations but also correct their misspelling andsyntacticmistakes. Some apps are even equipped with the function of identifying users’ pronunciation and converting the oral version into written one. With excessive reliance on those technologies, youngsters are largely likely to struggle to write essays or complete other paperwork without the assistance of such applications, as they gradually forget the correct use of words and grammar. Besides, as young people nowadaysare accustomed tousing informalabbreviationswhen sending message, they may also experience hardships in writing in a formal way.

解析

<立论2> 写：软件会有自动拼写提示和语法纠正，甚至有语音识别，久而久之，年轻人一旦脱离这种软件，就容易犯错

Ø conspicuous adj. 明显的

Ø exert vt. 施加

Ø automatically adv. 自动地

Ø syntactic adj. 句法的

Ø be accustomed to adj. 习惯于

Ø abbreviation n.[C] 缩写

Conclusion

In a nutshell, young people’s literacy skills can be negatively influenced by modern communication modes.

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