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The chart below shows the percentage of people enjoying different kinds of musics in the UK in 2014.

主体段分段方法：按照【年龄段】分段

主体1：15-24、25-34

主体2：35-44、45-64、65+

开头段

The bar chart compares the preferences for four types of music (jazz, rock, pop and classical) across five age groups in the UK in 2014.

概述段

Overall, younger peopletended to favourmodern genres,whileclassical musicgained popularity with increasing age.In particular, it wasthe most preferred typeamong those aged 65 and over.

思路要点：

- 年轻人更喜欢现代类型的音乐；classical music随着年龄段增长，受欢迎程度上升

- classical music是65+最喜欢的类型

Body paragraph 1

Among the 15–24 and 25–34 age groups, pop musicwas the most popular genre,accounting for55% and 40% respectively. Rock musicranked secondinboth groups,attracting30% of people aged 25-34and 25% of those in the 15-24 group.In contrast, classical music wasleast favoured bythe youngest group, with only 5% expressing a preference for it,approximately half the proportion ofjazz.These two categories were almost equally popular amongthe 25-to-34 age group, at around 10% each.

思路要点：15-24、25-34

- 15-24和25-34喜欢pop music的占比都最高，分别为55%和40%

- 这两个年龄段中rock music都排第二，其中25-34占比为30%，15-24占比为25%

- classical music在15-24中占比都最低（5%），大约是jazz一半

- classical、jazz在25-34占比几乎相同，约为10%

Body paragraph 2

However, preferences among the older age groupsfollowed a different pattern. Rock music was enjoyed by around 35% of 35-44-year-olds and 40% of those aged 45-to-64,making it the most popular typeamong middle-aged groups. Pop musicwas also common amongthe 35-to-44 group (30%),twice the figures forboth jazz and classical music.Meanwhile, classical, pop and jazz musicshared similar levels of popularityamong the 45-64-year-old people,ranging from20%to25%.As forthe oldest group, classical musicdominated listeners’ preferences,representing35%,compared withjust 10% for pop music. Jazz and rock musicoccupied moderate levels of popularity, with 15% and 20% respectively.

思路要点：35-44、45-64、65+

- rock在35-44和45-64中占比都最高，分别为35%和40%

- pop music在35-44中排第二（30%），大约是jazz和classical的2倍

- classical、pop、 jazz在45-64中占比相似，在20%到25%之间

- 65+：classical占比最高（35%），但pop占比仅为10%；jazz、rock占比中等，分别为15%和20%

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