在英语中,表达“我也一样”需遵循特定结构:肯定句用“so”引导倒装,否定句用“neither ”或“nor”引导倒装。当句中混合了肯定与否定,或包含不同动词类型时,则统一使用“So it is with ...结构。今天推荐的原创英文,作者在这方面出现了典型的错误,同时伴随其它的词汇和语法错误。看看原文吧,你能发现几个问题?最后有思考题。
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一,发现问题
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DeepSeek对我的评价
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二,分析问题并修改
(一)英语中写日记用词组keep a diary
1.Mary keeps a diary every day.
2.I haven't keep diaries since last Sunday.
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(二)英语中的“也”这样表示,so用于肯定句中,neither,nor用于否定句中,都用倒装句。注意动词形式,行为动词用do, does,did构成倒装句;其它情态助动词提到句首即构成倒装句。
1.He goes to school by bike, so do I.
他骑单车上学的,我也一样。
2.He was ill last Monday, so were Tom and I.
他上星期一生病了,我和汤姆也一样。
3.He went there, so did my sister.
4.They will learn French, so will we.
5.I have finished homework, so has he.
我的作业做完了,他也一样。
6.Tom has a good time each day, so do I.
汤姆每天玩的愉快,我也一样。
7.He is never late for school, neither am I.
他从不迟到,我也一样。
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8.My mother can hardly write, neither can my father.
我妈妈几乎不会写字,我爸爸也一样。
9.My brother had lunch at school, nor did I.
10.The student has little water, nor does his sister.那个学生没有水了,他妹妹也一样。
如果肯定,否定,各种动词都有,就用so it is with...结构。
11.The girl is student from Japan, and she can speak Chinese very well, so it is with the boy.这个女孩来自日本,她汉语说的很好,那个男孩也一样。
12.He was good at English,but he didn't work out this English problem, it was with his friend.他英语很好,但是那道英语题他没有做出来,他的朋友也一样。
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所以原文的这句可以修改成两种版本
13.I haven't kept diaries ever since our traditional annual memorial days of our past ancestors. Neither have I run.
14.I haven neither kept diaries nor run ever since our traditional annual memorial days of our past ancestors
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(三)合并成从句,使句子严谨。把缩写形式写完整。
As Monday is the beginning of each new week, I need to resume my normal routine as soon as possible.
根据语境,优化词汇和语法,我最后修改版本如下
I haven't kept diaries ever since our traditional annual memorial days of our past ancestors,and neither have I run. As Monday is the beginning of each new week, I need to resume my normal routine as soon as possible.
自从一年一度祭奠先祖的传统节日过后,我就再没写过日记,也再没跑过步。周一意味着新一周的开始,我必须尽快恢复正常的生活节奏。
思考题[微风][烟花]有错就改。
1.He has breakfast early, so have I.
2.We've finished homework, and so did he.
3.The student has few pens, so do I.
4.He was never afraid of snakes, nor am I.
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