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The table below shows the income and expenditure of Harckley Hall, a public place for hiring over the period of three years.
主体段分段：按 <名称类别> 分段
Body 1：Total Income，Expenditure，Profit
Body 2：四种收入来源
开头段
The table illustrates changes in the revenue and expenses of Harckley Hall (an employment center) over a 3-year period.
概述段
It is clear thatroom-hiring consistentlyaccounted for the largest shareof revenue.Whiletotal incomeunderwent an upward trend, total expendituredropped with a more significant rate,resulting ina decrease in overall profit over the period.
思路要点：
- income of hiring room数值一直最高
- total income上升，但expenditure下降幅度更大，profit呈现下降趋势
Body paragraph 1
On the whole, total incomeincreasedfrom £83,500 in Year 1 toa peak of£85,000 in Year 2,before falling back to£84,000 in the last year. The total expenditure,however,saw a continuous risefrom £56,000 to £62,000 over the 3 years,narrowing the gap with the total income.As a consequence, the overall profitfell considerablyfrom £27,500 to £22,000.
思路要点：Total Income，Expenditure，Profit
- Total Income：第一年为£83,500→随后第二年达到峰值£85,000→第三年小幅度下降到£84,000
- Expenditure：第一年£56,000→持续上升，第三年达到£62,000，与total income差距缩小
- Profit：从£27,500显著下降到 £22,000
Body paragraph 2
Regarding specific revenue sources, we can find thatroom-rental incomeincreased slightlyfrom £34,000 to £35,000 during the first two years,before droppingremarkably to£32,000 in Year 3.Conversely,there was a modest decline inincome from running the Café, falling from £3,500 in Year 1 to £3,000 in Year 2,followed by a noticeable increaseof £1,000 in Year 3.As for funding, the local council donated £22,000 annually for the initial 2 years,after whichthis figuredipped marginallyto £21,000 in the subsequent year.In comparison, funding from other sourcessteadily increasedfrom £24,000 to £27,000 over the 3 years.
思路要点：四种收入来源
- 两种income方式数值呈现相反趋势
- Income of Hiring Room：第一年为£34,000→小幅度上升第二年达到£35,000→显著下降第三年达到£32,000
- Income of Cafe：第一年为£3,500→小幅度下降第二年达到£3,000→第三年显著上升了£1,000
- funding from local council：前两年平稳在 £22,000→第三年小幅度下降到 £21,000
- funding from other sources：第一年£24,000→持续上升，第三年达到£27,000
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