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9月14日场雅思考试,又回归热搜
,我们先来看一下这一次由余曰简老师带来的写作题目及范文解析~

09-14 观点类 – 社会话题 – 动物保护

It's a natural process for animal species to become extinct (Like dinosaur and dodo). There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

题目大意:

动物灭绝是自然规律(如恐龙或史前巨鸟)。我们没必要去拯救濒危动物。同意反对?

思路:

  • 题目没有明确的some people believe的表述来限定哪一句是观点,即这两句话都是主观的观点,需要在文中明确回应同意与否——即文章需要对两个分论点均予以明确表态:1)是否同意动物灭绝自然规律;2)我们是否有理由去拯救动物;

  • 第一点将这一问题全部归咎于自然规律,没有给出具体的前提条件,是有逻辑漏洞的,可以作为一个反对的理由——可以指出自然规律并非唯一原因,还有其他原因人类的活动;

  • 第二点可以指出我们有理由去拯救濒危动物。

关键词:

  • animal species:这里泛指所有动物的灭绝,是武断表达,可以举出个别动物的绝迹是由人类活动造成的,如华南虎的灭绝是来人类的滥杀;

  • no reason why people should try to prevent this:

提纲梳理如下:

范文:

I tend to disagree with the assertion that the extinction of wildlife is an irreversible trend, and I would therefore vote to take steps to save the endangered species.

Indeed, it might make sense to the Darwinians that only the strongest species should survive the existence of competition; those who are not adapt themselves to the changing environment deserve the fate of extinction: the disappearance of dinosaurs is a prime case in this point. Nevertheless, it is simple-minded to attribute the problem solely to the law of nature - what is ignored by them is the role of human activities behind the issue. For example, it is the relentless poaching that leads to the dramatic reduction of many endangered animals. One compelling example is the dying out of the southern China tiger in last century due to the excessive hunting. Also, another factor we cannot afford to ignore is the exhaust fumes from vehicles, which is the main culprit of global warming – a potential threat to animals inhabiting the arctic pole.

While the vanishing of wildlife is inextricably associated with human beings, we should not be reluctant to take steps to deter the problem for several reasons. The primary consideration lays emphasis on the moral perspective: we do not have the right to deprive the life of other species just to meet our greed and vanity. As well as the ethical concern, another factor we should afford to ignore is that the protection of wild animals is crucial to the survival of ourselves. The disappearance of any particular species will jeopardize the ecological balance which might impact the agriculture. For example, the extinction of owls or snakes means that there will be no natural enemy for field mice, which will lead to the destruction of crops.

In conclusion, it looks to me that the extinction of endangered animals is not the result of simply natural process. Rather, it is a problem to which I see human behaviors as a main answer, and therefore we have every reason to reverse the trend.

相关词汇:

Irreversible 不可扭转的

Darwinian 达尔文主义者

Poach 偷猎

exhaust fumes 废气

inhabit 栖息

inextricably 密不可分地

greed 贪婪

vanity 虚荣

jeopardize 破坏

9月28日场口语高频话题

1.历史上的名人

Describe a famous people in history you would like to meet

2.相见的外国明星

Describe a foreign star that you would like to meet.

3.拜访朋友的经历

Describe an experience that you visited a friend

4.有趣的谈话

Describe an interesting conversation you had with a stranger

5.错误的信息

Describe the information that was incorrect that you got.

6.房间里的照片

Describe a picture or a photo in your home

7.填空

Describe a sky you would like to see

8.读书写字的地方

Describe a place where you read and write (not your home)

想要获得以上高频话题的P2~P3高分答案

后台回复“0928”

In some countries, secondary schools aim to provide a general education across a wide range of subjects, while in others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to particular careers. Which education systems is more appropriate for today’s world ?

9月7日

Task 1 柱状图

Task 2

Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is causing damage to the environment, and should be stopped now. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

8月31日

Task 1 表格题

Task 2

Nowadays, some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of art by using a computer. To what extentdo you agree or disagree?

8月24日

Task 1 地图题

Task 2

Researches into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and dealing with diseases. Who do you think should fund these researches: private companies, individuals or governments.

8月17日

Task 1 柱状图

Task 2

More and more parents allow their children to play on computers or tablets (like iPads) because they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

8月10日

Task 1 折线图

Task 2

Some people think the responsibility of medicine companies is to spend money on researching medicines for people from poorer countries, while others think the main responsibility of medicine companies is to make money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

8月1日

Task 1 表格

Task 2

Some people think it is important for all children to learn history at school. Others believe that other subjects are more relevant to children’s development today. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

7月27日

Task 1 柱状图

Task 2

Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

7月20日

Task 1 柱状图

Task 2

Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives,but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems ? How to overcome it?

7月18日

Task 1 折线图

Task 2

The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

想要获得9月雅思考试写作大范围预测,

后台回复“9月”

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