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The graph below shows the average monthly salary and the prices of black and white and colour TV in Japanese yen from 1953 to 1973.
主体段分段思路：
主体1：black & white TV，colored TV
主体2：monthly salary
开头段
The line chart illustrates changes in the average monthly income as well as the cost of black-and-white and colored TV (measured in Japanese yen) between 1953 and 1973.
概述段
Overall, both types of televisions became cheaper during the period,whilethe average salaryincreased significantly, making televisions increasingly affordable.Throughout the twenty years, colored televisionsremained consistently more expensive thantheir black-and-white counterparts.
思路要点：
- 两种电视价格下降，人均收入上升
- 彩电价格始终高于黑白电视
Body paragraph 1
Initially, a black-and-white TVwas priced at10 yen,considerably higher thanthe average monthly income of 30 yen. Its pricethendropped remarkablyto 40 yen in 1968, before falling marginally to38 yen in 1973. Colored televisionsentered the marketin 1958 at 180 yen,more than twice the price ofa black-and-white model in the same year.This was followed bya dramatic decrease to110 yen in 1963, after which there was a slight decline to90 yen by the end of the period.
【思路要点】：两种电视价格
- 黑白电视：1953年价格为100 yen，远远高于收入(30 yen)→随后到1968年显著下降到40 yen→到1973年小幅下降到38 yen
- 彩电：1958年才开始出现，价格为180 yen, 比黑白电视价格高出2倍多→随后到1963年急剧下降到110 yen→到1973年小幅下降到90 yen
Body paragraph 2
The average monthly incomestarted at30 yen in 1953,roughly one-third the price ofa black-and-white TV, suggesting that it was relatively unaffordable for the average household.Over the following 15 years, the average salarymore than tripled to100 yen in 1968,surpassingthe price of a black-and-white TV in 1963.During the final 5-year period, itcontinued to rise more dramatically,exceedingthe cost of colored TV andreaching180 yen in 1973.
【思路要点】：月均工资
- 1953年月均工资为100 yen，大约是一台黑白电视价格的1/3
- 到1968年月均工资上涨了3倍多达到100 yen，并在1963年超过黑白电视的价格
- 1968年月均工资超过彩电价格，随后到1973年急剧上升达到180 yen
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