英语中的动词surprise 是一个典型的及物动词,意为“使惊讶”。既然是及物动词,它就必须在主动语态中携带宾语,表示动作的承受者。如果没有明确的宾语,通常要改用被动语态,或者使用其过去分词形式(surprised )来充当形容词性的成分(如表语、宾补或定语)正确掌握这一用法,可以避免“主语+surprise +无宾语”的常见错误。下面通过几个典型结构加以说明:
1. The noise makes me surprised.(宾补)
2. The noise surprises me very much. (谓语)
3. I'm surprised to hear the news.(表语)
4. I'm surprised that the child likes music.(形容词宾语补足语从句)
今天推荐的原创英文中就有类似问题,虽然还有其它方面的错误,仍然感谢原文作者提供的真实语境材料。看看原文吧,你能发现几个问题?
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一,我发现的问题
这段英文至少存在10个典型问题,值得认真分析。改好后,作文至少能提分10分。这些问题关系到名词数量限定词,不可数名词,定语从句,冠词用法,及物动词,被动语态,过去分词做定语等七个重点。理解之后,在其它题型(语法单选10分和语法填空题15分)英语科完全可能再提升5分以上。这样,高考总分至少可以再增加15分。
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二,分析问题并修改
这篇文章绝对是作者自己写的,因为只有自己写的才能暴露各种问题,也只有这样的原创纠错之后才有真正提高。可是,由于爱面子,许多学生不敢直面自己的错误,从而不敢自己尝试写英语作文。也正因如此,全国很多中学生在英语语法和词汇的理解与运用方面,表现得相当糟糕。
(一)surprise是动词,加ed可以构成过去分词做宾补It makes me surprised that...但是不地道,还是用I'm surprised that更简洁地道;这里从句太多了,所以定语从句不如改成of结构;miss一词多义,最后改成其它“喜欢,感兴趣”之类的词更好,避免产生歧义;
I'm surprised that a boy of only nine years old shows such a great interest in the classic computer system.
(二)software,不可数名词,不能用复数形式;副词also不能单独使用,加逗号,或者在句中;history是可是名词数量,注意数量限定词the。
He can install all kinds of software by himself such as Windows 95 and Windows Me etc. He also knows about the history of Windows from the first version to the latest version.
(三)confuse也是及物动词,用过去分词;习惯用语operating system;这里的定语从句可以简化成过去分词短语called the devil;最后一句,改成enjoy yourself更简洁。
I am confused why the sweet boy is so crazy about the operating systems. It is lucky that he doesn't like the terrible games called the devil by parents. Enjoy yourself, my sweet boy!
最后修改如下
I'm surprised that a boy of only nine years old shows such a great interest in the classic computer system.He can install all kinds of software by himself such as Windows 95 and Windows Me etc. He also knows about the history of Windows from the first version to the latest version.I am confused why the sweet boy is so crazy about the operating systems. It is lucky that he doesn't like the terrible games called the devil by parents. Enjoy yourself, my sweet boy!
我很惊讶一个只有九岁的男孩竟然对经典电脑系统如此感兴趣。他能自己安装各种软件,比如Windows 95、Windows me 等。他还了解Windows 从第一个版本到最新版本的发展历史。我有些困惑,为什么这个可爱的男孩会对操作系统如此着迷。幸运的是,他不喜欢那些被家长称为"魔鬼"的可怕游戏。尽情享受吧,我亲爱的孩子!
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三,总结
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思考题[微风][烟花]动词填空或改错。
1.The radio _(interest) the boy who is good at physics.
2.The news _(surprise) us that the young professor has died.
3.We are _(surprise) to hear the news.
4.This is the girl _(call) Mary.
5.Did you see 8−year−old boy just now?(有错就改)
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