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The charts below give information about the purposes of travel for passengers using four different UK airports in 2016.

主体段分段方法：按照饼分段

主体1：Stansted Airport、Luton Airport

主体2：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

开头段

The pie charts compare the primary reasons for travel among passengers at four airports—Gatwick, Stansted, Heathrow and Luton—in 2016.

概述段

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family wasthe dominant reason for travel,constituting48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel wasthe next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation.By contrast, business travelcomprisedunder one-fifth at each airport,whiletrips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要点：

- 四个机场的 visiting friends and family members、Holiday占比都较高

- business占比都较低

Body paragraph 1

At both Stansted and Luton, visiting friends and family wasthe dominant reason for travel,constituting48% and 47% respectively. Holiday travel wasthe next most common purpose, with 36% of passengers at Stansted and 34% at Luton flying for a vacation.By contrast, business travelcomprisedunder one-fifth at each airport,whiletrips for other reasons were negligible, at merely 2%.

思路要点：Stansted Airport、 Luton Airport

- 这两个机场蓝色(visiting friends and family)占比都最大，分别为48%和47%

- 两个机场排名第二位的都是黄色(holiday)，分别为36%和34%

- 绿色(business)占比都不超过20%，红色(other)都仅占2%，

Body paragraph 2

The remaining two airports, however, demonstrated different patterns.At Gatwick, holiday travelaccounted for the largest proportion, at 54%. Visits to friends and familyrepresented30%,roughly twice the share ofbusiness-related travel.In comparison, holiday trips and social visitswere equally popularat Heathrow Airport,each accounting for35%. About a quarter of passengers travelled for business (26%),which was more than four times the figure forother purposes (4%).

思路要点：Gatwick Airport、Heathrow Airport

- Gatwick Airport：黄色(holiday)占比最高(54%)；蓝色(visiting families and friends)占比30%，大约是绿色(business)的2倍

- Heathrow Airport：黄色(holiday)、蓝色(visiting families and friends)占比相同(35%)；绿色(business)占比26%，大约是红色(other)的4倍

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