11月24日雅思小作文示范写作 | 地图 两种厨房平面图对比

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November 27, 2025

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The maps below show the layouts of two kitchens.

主体段分段：一图一段

开头段

The two maps illustrate the layouts of two kitchens, comparing their size, structure and internal facilities.

概述段

Overall, both kitchens contain essential elements such as cupboards, a frozen area, and facility rooms. Kitchen Bis considerably larger,featuringadditional facilities including more cupboards, additional facility rooms, and a dining area.

思路要点：

- 两个厨房都有cupboard、frozen area、facility room

- Kitchen B面积更大，有更多的cupboard和一个餐饮区

Body paragraph 1

Kitchen Ameasures3 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width. The entranceis located in the top left corner,adjacent toa frozen area.The left sideof the kitchenis dominated bytwo cupboards: a smaller square one and a larger L-shaped one. A third cupboardis positioned in the top-right corner,directly abovea washing room.Further southis another L-shaped cupboard.At the bottom ofthe kitchen is a rectangular facility room, with two chopping spaces nearby.

思路要点：Kitchen A

- Kitchen长3米，宽2.5米

- entrance位于左上角，毗邻frozen area

- 左侧有两个cupboard（一个小面积、正方形，另一个大面积、L形）

- 右上角有另一个cupboard，它位于WC北边；再往南是另一个L形的cupboard

- 底部是facility room，附近有两片chopping space

Body paragraph 2

In contrast, Kitchen B ismore spaciousat 5 meters in length and 2.5 meters in width.Immediately insidethe entranceon the top-left sectionis a rectangular table with chairs.UnlikeKitchen A,the upper-left corneris occupied by a cupboard,whilea larger frozen areais placed at the top-right.Similar tothe design of Kitchen A,the left sidealso houses two cupboards, with another threelocated on the opposite side.However, the W/Cis positioned on the southern edge,just next totwo separate facility rooms.As inKitchen A, two chopping areasare situated on both sides ofthe kitchen,althoughthey take up more space.

思路要点：Kitchen B

- 左上角entrance入口进入，有一个table，周围有chairs

- 与Kitchen A不同，左上角是一个cupboard，但一个更大尺寸的frozen area位于右上角

- 与Kitchen A相似，左侧也有两个cupboard，对面是另外的三个cupboard

- W/C位于底部，临近两个单独的facility room

- 两组chopping space位于左边、右边，但面积更大，有助于提高效率

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