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The chart below shows information about fuel used in transport sector in 6 EU countries, compared to the average.
主体段分段:按照 <趋势> 分段
Body 1:EU average,Poland、Spain、Greece【上升趋势】
Body 2:Slovakia、Austria、France【下降、平稳】
开头段
The bar chart compares the proportion of sustainable energy used for transport across six European countries, comparing each country's usage with the European average in 2009 and 2010.
概述段
It is clear that on average, European nationsincreasedtheir renewable energy usage,whileSlovakia and Austriaexperienced declines.Besides, Greece was the only country thatconsistently had lower level ofconsumption than the European average.
思路要点:
- European average数值上升,但Slovokia和Austria数值下降
- 只有Greece两年数值都低于European average
Body paragraph 1
The European average of renewable energy usage in transportincreased marginallyfrom 4.2% in 2009 to 4.9% in 2010.This rising trend was also observed inPoland, Spain, and Greece.Among them, Spainsaw the most significant rise,withits renewable energy consumptionreaching the EU averageby 2010. Poland’s usagesurpassedthe average levelin both years,climbing slightlyfrom 5% to 6%during the given period.In contrast, Greececonsistently had the lowest figures,withits sustainable energy consumptiongrowing modestly to2% in 2010.
思路要点:EU average,Poland、Spain、Greece
- EU average:2009年为4.2%→小幅度上升到2010年达到4.9%
- Poland、Spain、Greece数值也上升
- Spain:上升最显著,2001年数值和EU average持平
- Poland:两年数值都超过EU average,从5%小幅度上升到6%
- Greece:两年数值都最低,小幅度上升到2010年达到2%
Body paragraph 2
However, the remaining three countriesexperienced a different patternin their consumption of renewable energy.Althoughthe energy consumption in Slovakiadropped significantlyto 7.8% in 2010, ittopped the listin both years. The figure in Austriaalsodecreased,falling remarkably to5.1% in 2010,slightly abovethe EU average for the same year.Meanwhile, Francemaintained stableusage at 6.1% across both years.
思路要点:其余三个国家
- 其余三个国家数值趋势不同
- Slovakia:数值大幅度下降到2010年的7.8%,但两年内数值都最高
- Austria:数值也下降,到2010年达到5.1%,轻微超过EU average
- France:数值保持平稳在6.1%
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