【初高衔接练习16】应用文写作

1．

假定你是李华，你从网上得知你的英国好友Tom所在的城市爱丁堡遭到了飓风的袭击。请你给他发送一封邮件，内容包括：

1）得知飓风信息；2）询问他及家人情况；3）给予安慰。

注意：

1）词数80左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

2．假定你是李华，计划在你校组建健身俱乐部，请写封邮件给你的交换生朋友Oliver，寻求他的意见和建议。内容包括：

1）写邮件的目的；

2）希望得到的帮助和支持；

3）表示感谢。

注意：写作词数应为80左右。

3．假定你是李华，你的好友John最近与朋友发生了一点冲突而大吵了一

架，他的朋友因此不理他，这让他很是烦恼。请你给他写一封邮件就他所遇

到的问题给他一些建议，内容包括：

1）给予他安慰；

2）给他提出一些合理的建议；

3）祝愿他生活、学习愉快。

注意：

1）词数80左右；

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

4．假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你想报名参选。请根据以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。

1）个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);

2）组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座);

3）组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛);

4）表达当选的愿望。

注意:

1）词数80左右;

2）请勿提及真实学校名称;

3）可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯;

4）开头、结尾已给出，不计人总词数。

参考词汇:

副主席vice president

竞选run for

Good afternoon, my dear friends,

My name is Li Jin. ________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

5．假定你是李华，学生会主席。你校学生会邀请美国外教 Nancy 参加即将举办的中 秋节晚会。请给她写一封邮件，内容包括：

1）邀请出席

2）时间：下周五晚上 6:00。

3）地点：演讲大厅（lecture hall）。

4）晚会内容。

注意：1）词数 80 左右。2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

6．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友 Jack 来信向你询问疫情期间（COVID-19 pandemic）如何保持健康。请你根据以下要点给他写一封邮件提些建议。内容要点如下：

1）合理饮食；2）加强锻炼；3）保持好心态。

注意：1）词数：100 左右；2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3）邮件的开头已写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

I'm so glad to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me how to keep healthy during the COVID-19 pandemic. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

7．假如你是高一同学李华，上个月你校举办运动会，请根据以下提示，给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信，介绍学校运动会。主要内容包括以下要点：

1）运动会前的准备工作；

2）运动会期间的表现；

3）运动会的感想。

注意：1）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；

2）词数在80词左右。

8．假定你是李华，你从网上看到一个名叫Tom 的澳大利亚男孩想交一个中国的网友。请你给他写封信，内容包括:

1）很乐意和他交朋友;

2）介绍自己;

3）希望得到回复。

注意:

1）词数100左右;

2）可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

9．假定你是李华，得知你的英国朋友 David 将于下个月来中国旅游。请你给他写一封信，推荐一个适合他旅游度假的城市。

内容包括：

1）推荐城市

2）推荐理由

注意: 1） 词数 80 字左右;

2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

10．假定你是校学生会主席李华。这学期，你校来了一些英美国家的交换生，由于语言文化方面的差异，他们还不太能适应新的学习生活环境。针对这种情况，你打算在校英语报上发表一篇英语文章，内容包括：

1）交换生目前面临的困难：感觉孤独，担心学业，对校园不熟悉等等；

2）提出合理建议：和中国学生交朋友，加入学校社团，课余时间参加汉语沙龙等；

3）期望。

注意：1）标题已给出；2）适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3）字数：80词

Have a Wonderful School Life

参考范文及解析部分

1．

Dear Tom,

How are you and your family doing? I feel really sad to learn the news from the Internet that a terrible hurricane struck your city and caused damage.

It is reported that a large number of houses now lie in ruins. I am really concerned for everything with you and your family. Please let me know about your condition as soon as possible. And if you need any help, please let me know. Don't worry, and everything will be fine.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件。写作背景：你从网上得知你的英国好友Tom所在的城市爱丁堡遭到了飓风的袭击。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）得知飓风信息；2）询问他及家人情况；3）给予安慰。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如： I feel really sad to learn the news from the Internet that a terrible hurricane struck your city and caused damage.运用了不定式作原因状语，同位语从句；It is reported that a large number of houses now lie in ruins.运用了主语从句；Please let me know about your condition as soon as possible. 运用了祈使句；And if you need any help, please let me know. 运用了条件状语从句，祈使句；Don't worry, and everything will be fine.运用了祈使句，并列句。

2．

Dear Oliver,

How is everything going?

I'm writing to ask for your suggestions and help because I'm planning to start a fitness club in our school. I know you were in charge of the fitness club in your school and have rich experience in starting and running a club. Would you please tell me how to start our club? What club events could we hold? I hope you will help my team by giving us your valuable ideas.

Thank you so much for your time and support in advance. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写封邮件给你的交换生朋友Oliver，寻求他的意见和建议。写作背景：你计划在你校组建健身俱乐部。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）写邮件的目的；2）希望得到的帮助和支持；3）表示感谢。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：I'm writing to ask for your suggestions and help because I'm planning to start a fitness club in our school. 运用了原因状语从句；I know you were in charge of the fitness club in your school and have rich experience in starting and running a club. 运用了宾语从句；I hope you will help my team by giving us your valuable ideas.运用了宾语从句；Thank you so much for your time and support in advance. 运用了祈使句。

3．

Dear John,

It's normal that we meet with some problems while getting along with others. I'd like to give you some advice on it.

Firstly, you should keep calm whenever meeting with something unpleasant. This can help you make right decisions and avoid making things worse. Secondly, I think you can offer to say sorry to your friend if you value your friendship. I'm sure he will be thankful to you and you'll become better friends.

Hope this advice will be helpful to you and wish you a happy life and study.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件就好友John所遇到的问题给他一些建议。写作背景：John最近与朋友发生了一点冲突而大吵了一架，他的朋友因此不理他，这让他很是烦恼。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）给予他安慰；2）给他提出一些合理的建议；3）祝愿他生活、学习愉快。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：t's normal that we meet with some problems while getting along with others. 运用了主语从句，省略；Firstly, you should keep calm whenever meeting with something unpleasant. 运用了时间状语从句；Secondly, I think you can offer to say sorry to your friend if you value your friendship. 运用了宾语从句，条件状语从句；I'm sure he will be thankful to you and you'll become better friends.运用了名词性从句，并列句；Hope this advice will be helpful to you and wish you a happy life and study.运用了宾语从句，并列句。

4．Good afternoon, my dear friends,

My name is Li Jin. I am a person with an outgoing personality. I'd like to run for vice president of the English club.

Outgoing and confident, I once served as monitor in high school, so I'm expert at management. I'm experienced in organising all sorts of activities through which students can exchange ideas and share stories. To make life on campus more colorful, I plan to hold lectures on learning strategies which can help organise everything in your mind. What's more, I shall hold some competitions, such as a debate.

I'd appreciate it if I could be chosen; I look forward to being chosen as vice president.

Thank you.

【解析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以某大学的学生李津的身份写一篇竞选演讲稿。写作背景：你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你想报名参选。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等);2）组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座);3）组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛);4）表达当选的愿望。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。 例如：Outgoing and confident, I once served as monitor in high school, so I'm expert at management.运用了形容词作状语，因果并列句；I'm experienced in organising all sorts of activities through which students can exchange ideas and share stories.运用了限制性定语从句；To make life on campus more colorful, I plan to hold lectures on learning strategies which can help organise everything in your mind. 运用了限制性定语从句；I'd appreciate it if I could be chosen运用了I'd appreciate it if...固定句式。

5．

Dear Nancy，

On behalf of the Students' Union, I am writing to invite you to attend the Mid-Autumn party.

As scheduled, it will be held in the lecture hall of our school at 6:00 pm. next Friday. We will have a good time enjoying performances as well as playing games. With the party approaching the end, we will share moon cakes and admire the full moon. In fact, it is not what we do but whether we can enjoy ourselves that matters.

I'm looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以学生会主席李华的身份写一封邮件。写作背景：你校学生会邀请美国外教 Nancy 参加即将举办的中 秋节晚会。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）邀请出席；2）时间：下周五晚上 6:00；3）地点：演讲大厅；4）晚会内容。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：As scheduled, it will be held in the lecture hall of our school at 6:00 pm. next Friday. 运用了省略，运用了被动语态；With the party approaching the end, we will share moon cakes and admire the full moon. 运用了with的复合结构；In fact, it is not what we do but whether we can enjoy ourselves that matters.运用了强调句。

6．

Dear Jack,

I'm so glad to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me about how to keep healthy during the COVID-19 pandemic. I'd like to give you some advice in detail.

For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday is of great importance. In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet, especially we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. For another, taking physical exercise regularly is a must to help keep fit. For example, you can play basketball or take a walk after school. Last but not least, being positive and hopeful is necessary. You should have the confidence that the human being will finally get over of it.

All in all, I do hope you and your family can be safe and sound. I'd appreciate it very much if you can find these suggestions helpful.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封邮件提些建议。写作背景：你的美国笔友 Jack 来信向你询问疫情期间如何保持健康。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）合理饮食；2）加强锻炼；3）保持好心态。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：For one thing, except for wearing a mask and keeping distance when going out, paying attention to what we have everyday is of great importance. 运用了时间状语从句的省略，现在分词作状语，宾语从句；In order to get enough energy and nutrients, we need a balanced diet, especially we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables. 运用了不定式作目的状语；Last but not least, being positive and hopeful is necessary. 运用了动名词作主语；You should have the confidence that the human being will finally get over of it.运用了同位语从句；All in all, I do hope you and your family can be safe and sound. 运用了强调，宾语从句；I'd appreciate it very much if you can find these suggestions helpful.运用了I'd appreciate it if ...固定句式。

7．

Dear Tom,

How is everything going?

I'm writing to share with you my unforgettable experience of the sports meeting held last month.

Before the meeting, my teacher and classmates made a detailed plan. We were all very excited to give advice and provide anything needed. At the same time, the athletes made full preparations, running and jumping in their spare time. During the meeting, the athletes competed fairly on the playground with the other students cheering around. What a great time!

I think our class has become more united after the sports meeting. In addition, the classmates know more about each other and become closer. As a result, we are more hopeful of the colorful school life.

I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以高一同学李华的身份给你的英国笔友Tom写一封信，介绍学校运动会。写作背景：上个月你校举办运动会。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）运动会前的准备工作；2）运动会期间的表现；3）运动会的感想。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：We were all very excited to give advice and provide anything needed. 运用了不定式作原因状语；During the meeting, the athletes competed fairly on the playground with the other students cheering around. 运用了with的复合结构；What a great time!运用了感叹句；I think our class has become more united after the sports meeting.运用了宾语从句；I would appreciate it if you could reply soon.运用了I would appreciate it if...固定句式。

8．

Dear Tom,

I am very glad to learn from the Internet that you are looking for a friend from China. I have never been to your country, but I would be very happy to be your friend.

First, let me introduce myself. I'm 15 years old. I'm a freshman in senior high school. My favorite subject is biology. I want to go to college and finally become a doctor. I like to play football and basketball. My other hobbies are singing and dancing.

It can't be more happy to receive your e-mail talking about yourself. I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写封信。写作背景：你从网上看到一个名叫Tom 的澳大利亚男孩想交一个中国的网友。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）很乐意和他交朋友;2）介绍自己;3）希望得到回复。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：I am very glad to learn from the Internet that you are looking for a friend from China.运用了不定式作原因状语，宾语从句；I have never been to your country, but I would be very happy to be your friend.运用了转折并列句；First, let me introduce myself.运用了祈使句；It can't be more happy to receive your e-mail talking about yourself. 运用了it作形式主语。

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Dear David,

Hope this letter finds you well. Knowing that you are coming to China next month, I am writing to recommend a city to you.

Recognized as Venice in the east, Shaoxing attracts tens of thousands of tourists from home and abroad every year. A -minute drive will take you from Xiaoshan International Airport to the ancient city to explore its beauty. What will amaze you most are the ancient buildings and bridges dating back to over 3,000 years. Having a taste of local cuisine and wandering along the ancient allies will be an unforgettable experience for you.

Hopefully, my recommendation will be helpful. Wish you a pleasant journey in China!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题是一篇英文信件，要求考生以李华的身份写一封信, 推荐一个适合英国朋友 David 旅游度假的城市。写作背景：你得知英国朋友 David 将于下个月来中国旅游。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）推荐城市；2）推荐理由。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：Knowing that you are coming to China next month, I am writing to recommend a city to you.运用了现在分词作原因状语，宾语从句；What will amaze you most are the ancient buildings and bridges dating back to over 300 years. 运用了主语从句，Having a taste of local cuisine and wandering along the ancient allies will be an unforgettable experience for you.运用了动名词作主语。

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Have a Wonderful School Life

With exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look. However, they are facing a number of challenges, like feeling lonely, worrying about schoolwork and being unfamiliar with campus.

As the chairman of the Students' Union, I'd like to give some suggestions. To overcome the difficulties, on the one hand, it would be better for exchange students to make friends with their Chinese classmates, sign up for some school communities, so that they will get used to the new environment. On the other hand, Chinese Salon is a good place for them to visit in their spare time.

We do hope every exchange student can lead a fantastic and wonderful life in our school.

【解析】本题是一篇应用文写作，要求考生以校学生会主席李华的身份在校英语报上发表一篇英语文章。写作背景：这学期，你校来了一些英美国家的交换生，由于语言文化方面的差异，他们还不太能适应新的学习生活环境。写作要点已经给出，属于提纲类作文，内容包括：1）交换生目前面临的困难：感觉孤独，担心学业，对校园不熟悉等等；2）提出合理建议：和中国学生交朋友，加入学校社团，课余时间参加汉语沙龙等；3）期望。提示中的内容比较泛泛，需要适当补充。本题对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次

【点评】本篇作文要点齐全，结构完整，条理清晰，应用了较多的语法结构和词汇，熟练地使用了语句间的连接成分，使整个文章结构紧凑，很好地完成了写作任务。例如：With exchange students becoming new members, our school has taken on a new look.运用了with的复合结构；To overcome the difficulties, on the one hand, it would be better for exchange students to make friends with their Chinese classmates, sign up for some school communities, so that they will get used to the new environment. 运用了it作形式主语，目的状语从句；We do hope every exchange student can lead a fantastic and wonderful life in our school.运用了宾语从句，强调。

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