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The two bar charts compare the average price (USD) of flights operated by three different airlines from City H to four cities in Africa, in October and December 2017.

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开头段

The bar charts compare the ticket prices charged by three airlines based in City H for flights to four African cities (Cairo, Lagos, Nairobi, and Cape Town) in October and December of 2017.

概述段

Overall, all three airlinesincreased their prices, with flights to Cape Townconsistently charging the highestin both months.Among them, Airline Cremained the priciest optionto all four cities,whileAirline Awas the most economical choice.

思路要点：

- ABC价格都上升

-三种航班去Cape Town的价格都最高

- C两个月份收费都最高，A两个月份收费都最低

Body paragraph 1

In October, Airline C’s fare to Cape Townwas the highestat $470,closely followed byits fees for Cairo at $450 and Lagos at $420.Conversely, only $400 was charged for Nairobi. Airline Bfollowed a similar pattern, with Cape Townremaining the most expensive destination($400) and Nairobithe cheapest($330). Airline A,by contrast,offered the most economical flightsto all four cities, with faresranging from$280to$350.

思路要点：October

- Airline C：去Cape Town的航班收费最高($470)，Cairo第二($450)，Lagos 第三($420)，Nairobi最低仅为$400

- Airline B：和Airline B相同的收费排名，Cape Town收费依旧最高($400)、Nairobi最低($330)

- Airline A：四个城市的航班收费最低，区间范围是$280(Nairobi)到$350(Cape Town)

Body paragraph 2

Two months later, all three airlinessaw a rise in their prices toall four destinations. Airline C’s flight to Cape Townsaw the most pronounced increase to$650, with its fees for the remaining three citiesgrowing byroughly $150 in December.The other two airlines experienced similar growth: Airline B's faresrose slightlyto between $450 and $550,whereasAirline A's prices remained the lowest,staying below$500 for each destination.

思路要点：December

- 三家航司去四个地方的机票费都涨价了

- Airline C：到Cape Town机票价格上涨最显著，达到$650，到其他三个地方的机票费用上涨了大约$150

- Airline A和Airline B增幅类似

- Airline B票价上涨到$450至$550之间，但Airline A的票价依旧最低，都在$500以下

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